tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post1217781830376066496..comments2024-03-28T06:43:50.925-04:00Comments on The Poem Farm: Elf Owl and Second Grade GiftsAmy LVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-40708433388602274342013-06-24T23:03:11.308-04:002013-06-24T23:03:11.308-04:00very nice, Amy! i'd love to take a sunshine-sn...very nice, Amy! i'd love to take a sunshine-snooze, perhaps not in a saguaro, however.:)BJ Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810656260650783785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-79732311777254737902013-06-23T10:00:27.852-04:002013-06-23T10:00:27.852-04:00I learned, and saw, elf owls on trips to Mexico wi...I learned, and saw, elf owls on trips to Mexico with students. The saguaros were a study of an amazing habitat, Amy. And I love that you found such rhymes for them! Those 2nd graders really did good word work too-love the "S Poem". Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-33610900540902300272013-06-22T14:07:12.100-04:002013-06-22T14:07:12.100-04:00Amy,
Such talented young poets. Enjoyed them all....Amy,<br /><br />Such talented young poets. Enjoyed them all. I also loved learning about the snuggled high, moth killing elf owl. Non-fiction poetry was a favorite in 4th grade! Thank you. <br /><br />~ Theresa <br />Looking for the Write Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04556736797707525140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-39820861123065596452013-06-21T20:44:46.377-04:002013-06-21T20:44:46.377-04:00Amy,
I enjoyed the way you placed yourself right i...Amy,<br />I enjoyed the way you placed yourself right in that cactus --- a bully to poor moths passing through. The repetition at the beginning and end really holds the poem tightly together and makes me feel as if I am seeing you (elf owl) right near me.<br /><br />Always love the student work! <br /><br />Cathy Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-44211662712881642042013-06-21T14:10:10.017-04:002013-06-21T14:10:10.017-04:00Amy, I'm hoping that you and Betsy got to meet...Amy, I'm hoping that you and Betsy got to meet at All Write! I'm sad not to be there this year!<br /><br />Love you as an elf owl -- I had no idea you were that small!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-12769840618622219142013-06-21T00:41:39.039-04:002013-06-21T00:41:39.039-04:00What beautiful second grade work. Loved reading an...What beautiful second grade work. Loved reading and seeing all those works of art. <br />Um, and sunshine-snooze is brilliant.Betsy Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-29621475370188710372013-06-20T08:20:54.239-04:002013-06-20T08:20:54.239-04:00Love your little elf owl. Last week in writing ca...Love your little elf owl. Last week in writing camp we talked about making up words using the hyphen. Wish I had had your <i>sunshine-snooze</i> then. Aren't saguaro cacti cool things indeed! <br />Also enjoyed the student poetry and Caroline's technique. Looks like it was a fun Skype visit. I can't wait for Teachers Write Camp. See you there!Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-65370419431958618342013-06-20T08:13:38.118-04:002013-06-20T08:13:38.118-04:00How did you come to find the rhymes for 'sagua...How did you come to find the rhymes for 'saguaro?' I would think that took some time! Love the intimacy of your poem - as well as those 2nd-graders' poems!Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-86015168994448326622013-06-20T07:14:18.645-04:002013-06-20T07:14:18.645-04:00Fun post, Amy. I love the second grade poems and ...Fun post, Amy. I love the second grade poems and am in awe at all of the ways people connect through blogging. Enjoy your time in Indiana.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11275286826634283515noreply@blogger.com