tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post156033815979520493..comments2024-03-28T06:43:50.925-04:00Comments on The Poem Farm: Writing the Rainbow Poem #2 - LavenderAmy LVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-89137098671841863512017-04-10T08:15:11.106-04:002017-04-10T08:15:11.106-04:00Amy, I enjoyed reading through your process to get...Amy, I enjoyed reading through your process to get to the final version of your poem for #NPM17. The rhythm of the poem allowed my mind to float into a lavender-variegated sky.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-59435012617464896752017-04-04T06:13:00.366-04:002017-04-04T06:13:00.366-04:00Loved peeking inside your notebook at your brainst...Loved peeking inside your notebook at your brainstormed list. So glad that lavender sky made it into your poem. Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-13781363943436148732017-04-03T11:48:09.527-04:002017-04-03T11:48:09.527-04:00I love this idea, Amy. I am going to share it wit...I love this idea, Amy. I am going to share it with my students and invite them to "Pick A Crayon, Write a Poem"! Michelle Schaubhttp://www.michelleschaub.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-4903247478550342012017-04-03T07:49:34.995-04:002017-04-03T07:49:34.995-04:00A fun poetry theme for April. You're so creati...A fun poetry theme for April. You're so creative, Amy.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-48892859601473991342017-04-03T06:32:14.876-04:002017-04-03T06:32:14.876-04:00Here's another vote of appreciation for your p...Here's another vote of appreciation for your process notes and two versions to compare side by side.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-33984990363702159592017-04-02T13:31:00.113-04:002017-04-02T13:31:00.113-04:00I love the rhythm of your lavender poem and the st...I love the rhythm of your lavender poem and the stream-of-consciousness feel, which I'm sure was not as easy as it appears. Surprising yet satisfying ending, too!JoAnn Early Mackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17812079420917080829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-69532220554808259002017-04-02T11:33:17.415-04:002017-04-02T11:33:17.415-04:00Thanks for sharing your process notes for "Ea...Thanks for sharing your process notes for "Each Morning." Definitely the shorter lines are the keeper version. I'm sitting in an airport on a layover... reading your post and I am delighted with the lighthearted, playful, imaginative mood you have teased me into, right down to your "Goodbye." Alice Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05302512837699702430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-26183938630074437762017-04-02T11:16:10.831-04:002017-04-02T11:16:10.831-04:00i have seen a lavender sky a few times... it's...i have seen a lavender sky a few times... it's magnificent! Yay for the padlet! xoIrene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-64341149133748123942017-04-02T10:13:43.812-04:002017-04-02T10:13:43.812-04:00When I saw the crayon color "lavender", ...When I saw the crayon color "lavender", my mind imagined a few other things, but not sky! What a nice surprise. We have them too, and I love that you had a child speak to all she was seeing against that beautiful sky. Fun to surprise!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com