tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post3071809348136890157..comments2024-03-02T08:53:13.969-05:00Comments on The Poem Farm: Sky Tickle & Old PoemsAmy LVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-15685446515858926092012-06-08T21:48:41.036-04:002012-06-08T21:48:41.036-04:00I used to think if I was strong enough, I could go...I used to think if I was strong enough, I could go all the way around at the swings. Obviously, your swinging poem touched everyone, still loving that idea of toes tickling the belly of the sky. Thanks Amy. I'm glad you found this & shared it now. Lovely.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-84740026522402330502012-06-08T16:17:32.255-04:002012-06-08T16:17:32.255-04:00Fun! Your revision completely made this poem!Fun! Your revision completely made this poem!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-37573566855453085022012-06-08T15:24:04.228-04:002012-06-08T15:24:04.228-04:00Love this.Swings are a favorite and I still love t...Love this.Swings are a favorite and I still love them. Thank you for sharing.Jonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299647754479967070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-32562797221500317542012-06-08T09:52:37.266-04:002012-06-08T09:52:37.266-04:00and as my eye swoops from low lines to high i can ...and as my eye swoops from low lines to high i can hear the squeak of my old childhood playground swings filling in the rhythm.<br /><br />neat-o!david elzeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16653215150526146224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-40930776139388249972012-06-08T09:18:01.300-04:002012-06-08T09:18:01.300-04:00What a neat concrete poem!What a neat concrete poem!Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06002979405140444228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-65766824945476647842012-06-08T08:42:40.723-04:002012-06-08T08:42:40.723-04:00I still love to swing! Very nice. I like the concr...I still love to swing! Very nice. I like the concrete version, too.Dorainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-64121329173574717742012-06-08T08:29:53.366-04:002012-06-08T08:29:53.366-04:00Love the new concrete version of your poem. Perfec...Love the new concrete version of your poem. Perfect capture of movement and joy. Can just feel my tiptoes tickling the sky. I also love your drawing of the little boy with glasses :).jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-56340762854986630262012-06-08T07:16:43.376-04:002012-06-08T07:16:43.376-04:00What a fun way to play with your poem. I just love...What a fun way to play with your poem. I just love this image and will probably jump on a swing with my students today at recess just to feel that tickle! And...Thank you again for your kind words and encouragement.Betsy Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-88260338107355603782012-06-08T04:08:36.745-04:002012-06-08T04:08:36.745-04:00So lovely, Amy! You perfectly captured the moment,...So lovely, Amy! You perfectly captured the moment, and what a difference the absence of a "the" can make. :)Renee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13520719663052253627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-20977481009888742852012-06-08T01:38:41.535-04:002012-06-08T01:38:41.535-04:00Amy, you don't inspire only young poets, but o...Amy, you don't inspire only young poets, but old ones too. Love your ideas for writing and rewriting and journaling. What a great model!<br /><br />(And this poem is so much fun, plus true--even grandmas remember tickling the sky with their toes:)<br /><br /><a href="http://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Violet</a>Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.com