tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post845242915838410992..comments2024-03-02T08:53:13.969-05:00Comments on The Poem Farm: Apology - A Poem of AddressAmy LVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-19645452490154425922015-06-06T07:38:52.721-04:002015-06-06T07:38:52.721-04:00Amy,
You tell this story so well, through pictures...Amy,<br />You tell this story so well, through pictures, poetry, and example of an address. I will remember this poetry form well, thanks to you. Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-59509249644694083282015-06-06T07:23:53.215-04:002015-06-06T07:23:53.215-04:00You. Amazing. Inspirational. I don't have to l...You. Amazing. Inspirational. I don't have to look for a poem idea, there is one right there in every little moment of my life. I could write about the sound of the wind through the open windows this morning...<br /><br />The notebook post is a national treasure. It will be as fabulous in the fall for my new group of writers as it is this summer!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-6836085210792148922015-06-05T20:11:07.687-04:002015-06-05T20:11:07.687-04:00By the title, Amy, I thought we were in for This i...By the title, Amy, I thought we were in for This is Just to Say poem like William Carlos Williams' apology for eating the plums! Of course, you are really not to blame for the window looking like sky. I love how the line about the wood thrush's eye following you offers hope that she will recover. Joyce Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02905709719444916488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-44834853189846194852015-06-05T17:49:14.773-04:002015-06-05T17:49:14.773-04:00So glad your wood thrush's misfortune had a ha...So glad your wood thrush's misfortune had a happy ending. We moved our bird feeders closer to the house this year to avoid the glass crashing--that's helped a lot, but wouldn't help your thrush. I love the voice in this poem, especially in the fourth stanza.Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-9429432723323237152015-06-05T17:17:51.965-04:002015-06-05T17:17:51.965-04:00Poor birdie! Glad he/she recovered!!Poor birdie! Glad he/she recovered!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-79142932768031386322015-06-05T12:01:24.721-04:002015-06-05T12:01:24.721-04:00Hayden's link is incorrect - In case anyone is...Hayden's link is incorrect - In case anyone is looking for this poem it is here: http://www.sharingournotebooks.amylv.com/p/try-writing-mask-poem.htmlDonna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-69181302358761145812015-06-05T11:42:56.650-04:002015-06-05T11:42:56.650-04:00Oh, I hate when that happens. We have such large w...Oh, I hate when that happens. We have such large windows and live in the woods, so birds frequently hit my windows. I always feel terrible when that happens...the cat does too, as he can't get outside to fetch them while they are stunned!<br />Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-78019326208133641122015-06-05T09:04:22.542-04:002015-06-05T09:04:22.542-04:00So happy that you posted the varied pics & tha...So happy that you posted the varied pics & that he's okay. I don't have that problem now but did at my other house. Poor birds, thinking that they're flying into sky. Love seeing so many notebook/sketching ideas Amy!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-88962552792678815872015-06-05T08:48:12.607-04:002015-06-05T08:48:12.607-04:00Poor thing - glad he was ok! We had two phoebes sl...Poor thing - glad he was ok! We had two phoebes slam into our upstairs windows last year and, alas, didn't survive. It was especially sad because we named our daughter, Phoebe, after the ones who come back year after year to make their nest above our front door.Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-75944244491553264372015-06-05T08:28:48.278-04:002015-06-05T08:28:48.278-04:00Oh, my. I am so glad there was a happy ending. H...Oh, my. I am so glad there was a happy ending. How sweet that you found a box for him to rest and recover in. <br />Your notebook sharing is growing and growing. I love this resource and now with so many students contributing! I wish I were still in school to share these with my kids. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-81986849466694191402015-06-05T07:23:27.762-04:002015-06-05T07:23:27.762-04:00I am having my kids write ideas for sharing your n...I am having my kids write ideas for sharing your notebook too! I'll send them to you as soon as they are ready. I love your poem and am so glad that lovely friend flew off. xoKimberley Moranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944774091932084680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343349006357324362.post-1254126018788298862015-06-05T07:23:05.528-04:002015-06-05T07:23:05.528-04:00I've had this happen as well, Amy. It seemed l...I've had this happen as well, Amy. It seemed like I was holding my breath for an age, waiting for signs of life. Thank goodness for happy endings! Love how you tell the story in photos as well as poetry. <br /><br />Browsing through your notebook celebration has been a joy. Wonderful student posts!<br />Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.com