Friday, May 29, 2026

Describe a Place

Three Bathtubs in Monroe, Utah
Photo by Amy LV 

 

 
Students - This past week, my husband and I visited our daughter and her boyfriend in Utah, and I saw my first desert and soaked in my first hot spring. While there were actually five bathtubs and two soaking tubs where we soaked (and yes, we did soak in each one), this picture of three bathtubs sticks with me. It was so strange and cool, so surprising. It makes me think about all of the many things in this world that have surprised me in the past, will surprise me in the future, and that I will never experience at all.
 
We don't travel a lot, so many of my surprises are right here at home: a new-to-me plant, an exceptionally beautiful sky, a morning of glitter-snow.  Today, consider looking around where you live, remembering places you have visited, strolling through books of places you have never been...and choose one small place and time to describe in your poem. Perhaps you, like, me, will come to a new idea as you write about a place. I realize that my imagination can always always grow.

Did you notice that I repeated the last line of my poem? I did this because I am honestly still marveling about this new picture (three bathtubs on a red hill) that now forever lives in my mind. 

Mary Lee is hosting today's Poetry Friday roundup over at A(Nother)Year of Reading with a delicious poetry potluck for these early early summer days. Each Poetry Friday, all are invited to share poems, poem books, poetry ideas, and friendship in this open and welcoming poetry community.  

I wish you delight!

xo,
a.
 
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10 comments:

  1. Your first desert and first hot spring! Yay for traveling and finding 3 tubs on a hill! xo

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  2. That picture is amazing. I liked your poem and the repetition at the end, emphasizing the delight of travel. Those prices cracked me up with the odd number change. I would have thought an even number ;) Thank you for the reminder, Amy, to vacation right here in our own community and look for those often-missed delights.

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  3. How amazing to soak in that earthy water! I imagine a wonderful feeling of connection. Funny how the pricing is so specific! Is there tax on a good soak?

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  4. OOOH. That looks delicious - a desert landscape and hot water? Please, count me IN.
    - tanita

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  5. Thank you for taking me to this lovely experience of soaking in a hot spring. Love that repeated line at the end.

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  6. I'm with you -- travel is great, but there are so many daily wonders in my own yard (first hummingbird last evening at the coral bells!) and neighborhood (fish in the little creek! deer in the easement!). --Mary Lee

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  7. Oh, how fun? Is the water murky like in your photo? I'm wondering if I would feel comfy submerging in that. But, I do love the idea of a hot springs. That sounds devine!

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    1. Yes! It's all the minerals I guess. It felt amazing. XO

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  8. Your first desert??? Just the idea of that fills me with wonder, wonder, wonder.
    ;)

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