Friday, May 28, 2010

Poetry Friday & MyPoWriYe # 58



When I taught fifth grade, our class studied light each year.  Every group had a cardboard box with holes at the end, a light bulb inside, color filters, and prisms.  We'd follow a series of experiments, and then we just played around.  Much of our learning came from this playing around, and I still think about the beauty of invisible colors becoming visible through a prism.  This idea got me reflecting on how poetry makes the invisible visible too!


Today I feel fortunate to welcome teacher Faith Catarella and her fifth graders from Pinehurst Elementary in Lakeview, NY, with a few of their poems.  In these you will notice serious work toward imagery, careful meter, and a stretch-of-self-and-words, just what we hope for.

Camping
by Emily Scarsella

I feel the grass tickling my toes
I see the kids playing in the open field
I smell the smoke from the burning fire
I taste the gushy burnt s'more
I feel the fire's warmth tickle my toes
I see the stars sparkle in the night
I hear the parents talking by the fire
I hear the birds peep good night


No Matter
by Zachary Morrisey 

A dream is a dream, no matter how you dream.
An eye is an eye, no matter what is seen.

A dog is a dog, no matter how it barks.
A pen is a pen, no matter how it marks.

A fire is a fire, no matter how it burns.
A job is a job, no matter how it earns.

A plant is a plant, no matter how it grows.
A day is a day, no matter how it goes.

A dream is a dream, no matter how you dream.
An eye is an eye, no matter what is seen.


Vampire
by Nicholas Damstetter

Feel the coldness of his breath,
And prepare yourself for your death.

He'll bite a strong bite on the neck,
Even while relaxing on your deck.

They come around every night,
So be prepared for all its might.

You're never safe, even at home,
Especially at night when you're alone.

For the Vampires will come at night,
So be prepared for all their might.

Here are a some poetry teaching tips from fifth grade teacher Faith Catarella:

1.  The room needs to be silent so that the students can go off into their own worlds and focus on their subjects.
2.  The students must feel comfortable with their abilities.  They must know that poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be good. (They get stuck on rhyming poetry.)
3.  It helps to use mentor poems as models for students' writing.

One strategy that I use to help students generate ideas is to have everyone sit in a circle and say one thing that they could write about.  While we do this, all students hold their writer's notebooks on their laps.  When they hear ideas they like or ideas that trigger other ideas, they write.  For example, I might start with something simple like "ice cream" to show the students we can think simply.  We go around the circle about three times, and then they go off to write.  The students will say anything and everything!  Their lists are huge!

Thank you so much, Faith and class, for sharing your work and ideas with us here today.  I continue to welcome teachers and students with poetry or thoughts to share.  Simply leave your information in the comments if you would like your classroom poets and poetry work to be featured here on a future Poetry Friday.

Since it's baseball season, here's a neat picture book version of Ernest L. Thayer's great poem Casey at the Bat.   This 2001 Caldecott Honor Book was illustrated by Christopher Bing.

If you have not visited Wild Rose Reader this week, do check out Elaine's fantastic list of Children's Books for Summer Reading

Today's Poetry Friday is hosted today by Tricia over at The Miss Rumphius Effect.  Hop on over there for the full roundup of poetry in the blogosphere today.

(Please click on COMMENTS below to share a thought.)

10 comments:

Elaine Magliaro said...

Amy,

I loved connecting science with poetry when I was teaching elementary school. My students wrote some wonderful poems about the science subjects they were studying about in class.

Love your "prism" poem.

Amy LV said...

Elaine,

It's pretty neat to think about how close science and writing are: the observation, the discovery, the connections. I bet that your students' poems helped them to solidify what they had learned too.

Thank you for the note. I think your spine poems are very cool - and the fact you only used poetry books says something about the size of your collection!

A.

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Mary Lee said...

Ah, yes, good times with those light boxes! I loved working out paths of reflection with the little steel mirrors! (Light was in our fourth grade curriculum for awhile, way back when...) Poetry IS like a prism, just as you wrote!

I agree with Faith's three tips. All true.

all things poetry said...

Nice metaphor, Amy, in Science is Like Writing.

Enjoyed the students' poems.

Laura Evans

violet said...

Amy, your poems are so much fun! (I read for a while here last night and especially like the one written to your daughter on her birthday in another post. Lucky girl!)

Violet
(http://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.com)

Amy LV said...

Mary Lee -
It's neat to know that you remember these boxes fondly too...I learned a lot with that project, and I miss working in the darkened auditorium with all of those good students. I hope the very end of your year is going smoothly!
A.
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Laura -
Thank you for the metaphor-compliment...I love learning from your blog.
A.
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Violet -
What fun it is to meet up with new friends here in the cyber-world. I could completely relate to your math poem last week!
A.

UncleLarry said...

Amy...

Mark Twain once said, "Great people are those who make others feel that they, too, can become great." Your passion for words is contagious and I am so happy to know that your passion and leadership for learning touches the lives of the Pinehurst learning community and beyond!

Thank you for featuring a few of our Pinehurst students and my colleague Faith on the Poem Farm blog! This is only the beginning...!

See you tomorrow!

Larry

Amy LV said...

Dear Larry,

I always find it an honor to work with your teachers and with you. Pinehurst is an inspiring school, and your students are lucky indeed!

'Looking forward to exploring more ways to publish...

Warmly,
Amy

ThessaBurbules said...

It has been a challenge getting my boy students interested in poetry compared to my girls that really enjoy it. But since most of my boys love science, they were surprised to read a poem that connected writing to science in a poem. My class is loving the idea of similies that they are using it everywhere in their writing! Love it! Thank you for your creative ideas!