Tuesday, April 24, 2012

U is for URGE

U is for URGE
Photo by Amy LV


Verbs are the most important of all your tools. 
They push the sentence forward and give it momentum...
flail, poke, dazzle, squash, beguile, pamper, swagger, wheedle, vex.
- William Zinsser, ON WRITING WELL

Students - Today's word, URGE, can be used as a verb, or it can be used as a noun.  You can URGE someone to make you a cake and you can have feel an URGE to make a cake yourself.  There have been a few words this month which can be used as either verbs or nouns, and today I chose the verb form.

As soon as I began thinking about the word URGE, I thought about what a mighty little word it is.  Just say the word aloud - URGE.  Doesn't it pack a lot of punch?  That strong feeling is what urged me to write today's poem about verbs.  I just began listing and thinking, playing with verbs I love.  You may notice something about the rhyme in this poem too.  (It's not just at the ends of the lines!)

You might wish to keep a page of mighty verbs in your own notebook, or maybe you will want to keep a verb list in class to share.  Either way or even if you don't do this, always reread your work asking, "Is there a mightier verb that would better push this sentence?"

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10 comments:

Christophe said...

I was gone all yesterday and I am a day behind! No Teepee poem from me. Did you intentionally use a trochaic tetrameter like "Song of Hiawatha?" It was the first thing that hit me with your teepee poem (although I admit to being intrigued by the question of first nation potty training.

Christophe said...

“U” is for urge (AND “T” is for teepee)

On my back, I stare,
Through my teepee’s open flap
And urge my soul through.

I owed you one so I combined. After you suggested a rhyming book, I found an app for my iPhone. It is called RhymeFree and returns rhymes, and syllables. My next poem will be something like:
"This midafternoon,
My contrabassoon
Dropped in the lagoon.
How inopportune!"

Poem of the Week - Lisa Vihos said...

Hi fellow trekkers. Here is what I got:

Reciprocation

When the urge to give
comes over you, don't forget
The urge to receive.

I love the contrabassoon in the lagoon, Christophe! Too funny!!

Amy Ludwig VanDerwater said...

Christophe - I did not intentionally use a trochaic meter...but maybe the heavens sent it to me! Thank you for noticing it.

Today I am soothed by both haiku. I found URGE to be a bit of a hard word with those two middle consonants, but a soul through a teepee flap and the wisdom of receiving have changed my thinking. Thank you both!

As for that inopportune midafternoon...perfect! 'Just got an iPhone this week, and oh RhymeFree is on the way...thank you! a.

skanny17 said...

Hi Amy,
I am new to the blogosphere but have been following you for almost the entire month! I first met you at MM Poetry and then Melinda H. told me great things about you. Your site and you are wonderful. I really enjoy your poems and your ideas. Wow and you just keep on going with more and more. I think it is so helpful that you have cataloged your poems. I will definitely share this with all the teachers I meet and am in contact with. I love your urge poem...it surged!!! I know Amy Merrill from Binghamton a bit and I know she talked to me about you. I hope to convince people in my area here in CNY to have you come to do some workshops. Looking forward to what you have to share next and will also be going back to read your older posts and your poems. Thank you for your generosity!!
Janet F.

Penny Klostermann said...

Another fun, rhytmic read.

Amy Ludwig VanDerwater said...

Thank you, Janet & Penny...Janet - I wrote to you through e-mail! a.

Linda at teacherdance said...

A poem of advice, great stuff Amy. Maybe students will heed your call to have that urge for verbs! Thank you!

Natalie said...

"Pack your pocket full of verbs" Love that. You packed this poem full of some great ones! ;)

Author Amok said...

I love those amphibian condominiums. That's one rocking science poem, Amy!