Friday, November 19, 2021

Linger on a Lived Moment

 
Winnie in Her New Fort
Photo by Amy LV



Students - Winnie is one funny cat! Yesterday I watched her leap into this big heater box, pleased as punch. She loves boxes, as do many cats, and today I thought I would just tell the story of her an her newest favorite box.

You will notice that there is little punctuation in this poem - no end punctuation until the end. This gives the poem a bit of a breathless feeling, and I am not exactly sure why, but I wanted the poem to feel just rambly with the repeated word and and such little punctuation.

Today's poem simply tells something that truly happened in my life. I just lingered on it, seeing it from Winnie's (huge sunflower) eyes and letting the words fall all over themselves.

What is one small experience you might linger on? Something small you might tell in a poem? Will you tell it from your eyes or from the eyes of another? Will you repeat lines as you linger, repeat lines as I did?

We have many grand decisions to make as writers. Let's enjoy them all, be thankful for the moments and the ability to write and photograph and draw them. Here at November's end, I am, as always, thankful for you and for this community. And at this very moment, I am also thankful for Winnie's best friend Tuck who is lying and purring here on my desk!

My Writing Pal Tuck
Photo by Amy LV

Carol is hosting today's Poetry Friday roundup at Beyond Literacy Link with a gorgeous gallery full of autumn poetry and images . Please know that all are welcome each Friday as folks share poems, poem books, poetry ideas, and friendship.

6 comments:

  1. I'm thankful for YOU and for all the wonderful ways you invite us into writing!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Sunflower eyes...lingering on them is a treasured moment. If I looked for a moment with my cat, I'd be looking at her mischievous eyes as she chews on my plant. Thanks for the inspiration.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Sunflower eyes is the best description of cat eyes I've seen in a long, long time. Big smiles and finger snaps for this poem.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Amy, I really liked how your poem flowed and felt the breathless feeling that works so well. Thanks to you for the shoutout. I am sorry that it took me a while to get to your post. Happy Thanksgiving to you and family.

    ReplyDelete
  5. My granddaughter and I just spent yesterday drawing a few cats & talking about theirs. Wishing I had seen this before, but I will share your 'sunflower eyes' with her another time, Amy. Happy Thanksgiving!

    ReplyDelete
  6. I also loved the breathless feeling here, Amy, like a kid who retells a movie plot when they get home--so fun!

    ReplyDelete