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Students - Today I am happy to welcome my friend Kate Coombs, author of BREATHE AND BE: A BOOK OF MINDFULNESS POEMS illustrated by Anna Emilia Laitinen. As I read Kate's beautiful words, looked at Anna's gorgeous pictures, and thought about my mindfulness class, I realized that this book could not come at a more magical time in my life.
Reading Kate's invitation, I was moved to write a tanka-like poem myself. I will now hand the baton to her for the teaching about this ancient Japanese form. It is Kate who brought me back to this pin oak in my mind, Kate who helped me quiet myself and remember this place and moment from earlier this week. I am grateful.
Welcome, Kate! Would you please tell us about the tanka form and about your new book?
Writing Breathe and Be: A Book of Mindfulness Poems
Poems by Kate Coombs
Illustrations by Anna Emilia Laitinen
Writing a book about mindfulness wasn’t really my idea! My editor friend worked for a small publisher that was starting to do children’s books about yoga. She asked me if I would like to write a picture book about feelings or mindfulness. I said I would try. I was curious about the idea of mindfulness and started googling it to see what it was. I found out I liked it, but I wasn’t sure how to describe it for kids. What should I do?
When in doubt, try writing a poem. Because mindfulness is an idea from Asia, I thought I would use an Asian poetry form. But haiku seemed too short to me. Maybe tanka would work, though I didn’t know much about it.
So I googled tanka, too. I learned that tankas came before haiku in Japanese history and eventually turned into haiku. A tanka was similar to a haiku, but with more room for saying what I had to say. I decided to write a collection of tankas about mindfulness for kids. Most of them would be about nature since I had experienced mindfulness myself in nature.
I studied mindfulness some more. I read articles and books. I watched videos on YouTube. Then I started writing poems. I knew I had to write extra poems so my editor would have choices. I am sorry to say that the poem about taking a big bite of an apple did not make it into the book. But a lot of other poems did. This is a poem from the first draft:
My thoughts jump around,
bouncing and jouncing like balls—
I call them all back,
shaping them into one ball
that rests quiet in my hand.
Of course, after I wrote drafts of the poems I revised each poem over and over until it was just right. And then my editor made suggestions, so I revised the poems again. And again! This is how the poem above turned out:
How I rush rush rush!
Thoughts flutter and dart like birds.
Slow down, thoughts.
Come quietly with me.
There is time to breathe and be.
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Here, I’ll share two more poems from the book with you. They’re both about having a quiet place.
There’s a quiet place
in my head like an egg hidden
in a nest. A place
I go when the world is loud.
A moss-green forest with birds.
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I see myself
by the ocean, toes touching sand,
fingers finding a shell
at the edge of blue water.
Where is your quiet place?
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Are you ready to write your own quiet place tanka? Start by making a list of words and phrases to describe your quiet place in a way that paints a picture. Then turn the best things from the list into lines for a tanka. The syllable pattern in a tanka goes like this: 5, 7, 5, 7, 7. Or just think “short, long, short, long, long.” Note that unlike me, you don’t need any lines saying “quiet place.” You can just describe it.
Once you’ve created a quiet place for yourself, you can picture it whenever you’re feeling upset or worried. Pretend you are there. Breathe slowly and deeply while you picture it, and see if you feel a little better. That’s what a quiet place is for, to help you feel the peace and awareness that is mindfulness.
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Thank you so much, Kate, for joining us today! And thank you, Sounds True, for offering a giveaway to a commenter on this post. Please comment by next Thursday, November 2 at 11pm to be entered into a givaway to win a copy of BREATHE AND BE.
Congratulations to Cynthia J. Iannaccone for winning my book birthday giveaway for POEMS ARE TEACHERS. Thank you, Heinemann, for offering the book, and Cynthia, please think about the cookies you would like. There is also a new giveaway (5 copies!) for POEMS ARE TEACHERS at Goodreads and an interview and giveaway at Two Writing Teachers.
Too - don't miss the Halloween poems in the sidebar! Please help yourself to those poem treats.
Too - don't miss the Halloween poems in the sidebar! Please help yourself to those poem treats.
Happy Poetry Friday, friends! Visit Brenda for this week's Poetry Friday roundup over at Friendly Fairy Tales, and you will meet a mysterious poetic creature.
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