VanDerCamp in the Adirondacks
Photo by Amy LV
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Students - Today's poem is a concrete poem. It is in the shape of a short, fat pine tree. It did not, however, start out as a concrete poem. For today's post, I rummaged around in my digital files for a poem to share. (I looked the same way I do when rummaging around the refrigerator for something to eat!) The poem I found was this one -
Dew
When pines shake out their hair to dry
I wonder if they realize
What a pretty sound it makes
when water falls on tents and lakes.
- ALV
When I retyped the poem, I made two changes. One change was a line break/shape change. I started shifting lines around and decided...."Hmmm, maybe this would look cute as a tree!" I liked it.
Then I reconsidered the title. I always like imagining trees and rocks and natural things as having thoughts of their own, so I added to the personification of this poem by making the title a question, about trees and their self-knowledge.
This is just a one sentence poem, a shortie. Could I add more? Yes. But for this one, I just want to say one thing, make one small observation and stay right inside of that observation.
Save. Save. Save. That's some of my best advice for writers. Recycling bits of thought and poem allows you to see who you used to be and bump that up against who you now are. It was a joy for me to find this scrap, to remember trees from my past and to still wonder if they know their own loveliness.
Last week, I shared my collaboration with Diane Mayr in Spark 18 here and here. This week, over at Diane's blog, Random Noodling, you can see behind the scenes of how she created one of her great layered pieces. I think it is fascinating to read these process posts, and I feel very grateful to have been paired with Poetry Friday regular Diane on this round!
This week it is a treat to have author Kate Messner visiting Sharing Our Notebooks. If you are notebook keeper, you will want to visit here to peek inside her notebooks. If you are a teacher and your class keeps notebooks, this site is growing to be quite full and useful!
Laura Purdie Salas is hosting today's Poetry Friday at Writing the World for Kids! Head on over to her place for the round up and enjoy the poem-festivities!
About next week...right now I am on the schedule to host. But I have traded with Betsy Hubbard. So if you keep the calendar in your sidebar, please note that change. Poetry Friday on October 12 at Teaching Young Writers with Betsy Hubbard, and I will host here at The Poem Farm on November 30.
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