An Old Picture of Hope and Monster
Photo by Amy LV
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Students - I have been listening to the news lately, and there has been lot of talk about bullying. The other day, maybe after too much news, this line popped into my head -
Let's not talk about bullies. Then, over the past few days, it kept on popping up in my head, and I could not shake it out. So that's where this poem came from at first. Once I started writing, though, I realized that if I don't want to talk about bullies, there must be something else that I DO want to talk about. And there is. Kindness.
When we used to live in Amherst, NY, we had a neighbor named Nancy. Nancy would feed birds right out of her hand, right out of the air, and she knew each chickadee by sight. This past summer, our daughter Georgia volunteered at a wildlife rehabilitation center with our friend Margaret, and there she witnessed much kindness as people fed injured herons and orphaned possums. Just yesterday, I walked into my credit union, and a man waited to hold the door for me to walk through. Good people are everywhere, and I wish to celebrate them.
If you need a writing idea, you might try asking yourself...
What do I NOT want to talk about? What DO I want to talk about? You might even want to begin with a line like, "Let's not talk about..." and see where it takes you. (You can always take off that first line later!)
In terms of structure, you may have noticed that this poem repeats the word
let's over and over again, usually at the beginning of the lines. In my mind, I'm calling this an invitation poem as it invites the reader to do something...talk goodness.
You may also notice the circular structure. The first two and last two lines are the same - I love doing that!
Today's picture is of our oldest daughter, Hope, a few years ago. She is holding Monster, a wonderful cat who has since died. We took stray Monster into our hearts years ago, and he returned the favor by loving some abandoned kittens we found in a ditch. Sometimes animals are the most kind of all...
Congratulations to Diane Mayr (
Random Noodling)....winner of last week's giveaway of
THE POETRY FRIDAY ANTHOLOGY! Please send me your snail mail address, Diane, and I will get it off to you.
Over
Sharing Our Notebooks, Peter Salomon is still visiting on the eve of the publication of his book
HENRY FRANKS. Stop by and read about Peter's first notebooks and enter yourself in the giveaway of his new book - the drawing is tomorrow!
Katya is hosting today's Poetry Friday roundup over at
Write. Sketch. Repeat. Visit there to see who's got what at today's poem party!
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